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Monday, March 26th 2007

5:48 AM

Love & Spain (1)

  • Mood: eating mood
  • Music: Isabel - Il Divo

HOLA! wassap? well! today i will post a part if my story ( chapter a week! ) hmm... many of u might wonder... why did foola wrote this story!? and why the names are so weird!!?  acually, those are nicknames of some of my previous classmates ( from British Council ), close friens and even my cousins! this story is supposed to be like... 2 pages meximum! but not it's mashalla it's more than 20 pages! and still didn't finished HALF of it!!  

please enjoy while reading...

 

 

Love & Spain (1)

 

 

Long time ago in the beginning of the eighteenth century, Don Albert Don Mozart Salieris lived with his wife, the daughter of Don Alexander: Lady Madeline, who was known by her beauty.

On a dark September, Lady Madeline had her first baby; she named him for the honor of her grandfather: Don Meto’o. Don Albert was a famous politic, he was the most trusted person for the king of Russia, and that made his family one of the richest families in Russia, until he finally got the thrown.

When Don Meto’o was only four years old, his mother Lady Madeline was kidnapped by his uncle: Don José Don Mozart Salieris, who committed suicide after his crime immediately, his body, was found, but Lady Madeline was missing, the guards had not found her. And by that, roamers and gossips said that Lady Madeline had died, and no one knows the truth yet.

            Years had past and Don Albert realized that Don Meto’o needed a mother, so he married his lovely neighbor: Lady Katherine.

 Lady Katherine gave birth for five sons: Don Negro, Don Antonio and Don Marco (are twins), Don Robert, who was known with his intelligence and finally the youngest brother: Don Haz.

 

Eighteen years later, Don Meto’o took the crown, after poisoning his dinner. No one knew the reason of Don Albert's death Except Don Meto'o, who had an enormous plan.

Don Meto'o and his two brothers Don Robert and Don Negro were up to bigger plans, Don Negro was planning to have India and Iran, Don Robert was planning to have Italy, Germany and France, but Don Meto'o was planning to have Spain only.  

A month later, Don Negro and Don Robert prepared their armies and went to war; they own the victories and never lost any battle, now Don Negro rules India and Iran and Don Robert rules Italy, Germany and France, and they gave freedom for those independence countries.

But Don Meto'o was thinking to have Spain badly, although Spain had her freedom many years ago. Don Meto'o wants to kill the king to lights the flames of war.

 

The Mask:

A year after the victories, Don Robert rules three countries, but he and his brothers know few kings from the countries beside, and by this occasion he had a meeting with his five brothers on the round table starting with:

"Good afternoon my brothers, I hope you are all in your best health.

He stopped for awhile and continued:

“Now Meto’o, Negro and I own few countries, and few of the kings around the world know us, and some heard about our victories only, and the rest, they do not even know us! This is a shame for us brothers. We must do something!”

The Salieris brothers kept quiet for few moments, whispering the case with each other, until Don Negro stood and said:

“We can have a trip around the world to know all the kings and queens and we can see god’s lands!”

Don Robert teased him and said:

“For god’s sake Negro! Do you want us to leave our lands and let the civil war flames again! That is impossible brother! I can never leave my lands!”

Don Negro laughed and said:

“It was a joke you fool!”

After hours of discussing, Don Robert stood again and said:

“Well, instead of visiting every kingdom, I am thinking of having a huge ball in Rome, and so, do agree brothers?"

Don Haz stood up saying:

"That is brilliant Robert, mother had chose the right son to call him Robert, (rare intelligent) in that ball we can meet kings and queens from all countries."

Don Robert smiled and replied:

“Thank you for your compliment brother.”

But Don Meto'o added:

"Well, I agree with you brothers, but what about a Mask? As you know Halloween is after three weeks, and so, no one will reject your invitation and believe me it will be the best ever!"

Don Robert thought for a moment and answered him with a smile:

"That is splendid Meto'o, ooh brother you are the best!! It is done then, my Mask will be after three weeks on Halloween's eve, so I guess that will be on Friday night."

He took a breath and continued:

"And so brothers, the meeting is over, thank you for coming over and the invitations will be sent tomorrow morning."

They all stood up and left the room, and Don Meto'o's plan had started perfectly.

 

It Is Time:      

At The Same Night, Don Meto’o had a secret meeting with Don Haz, in Don Meto'o's bedchamber, he started saying:

"Listen Haz, you are my closest brother, I want you to help me in something really big and important.”

In the beginning, Don Haz was not taking Don Meto’o seriously, he thought he wanted him to do some useless favors as usual, but he got shock when he heard his brother saying:

“Listen, it is time to kill the king of Spain Don Fernando, so I can have his country, and I will do that on Halloween's eve!"

Don Haz was really shocked, he answered:

"Ooh bloody hell! Meto'o! What are you thinking about? I prefer to be eaten by a lion then killing a king!

Don Meto’o got pissed and said:

“STOP THE NONESINCE! That will be for few seconds only, without any suspicious!

Don Haz felt about sad and said:

“But not in Robert's Mask! That will be a big shame Meto’o!"

After few moments of thinking, Don Haz asked again:

“But… why do you want to kill Don Fernando and not other king!?”

Don Meto'o looked him with mercy eyes and said in a nervous tone:

"I… I just want to kill him and have Spain for my own… please, please Haz that is my dream, please!"

Don Haz rolled his eyes as usual and said:

"Hmm, I never refused anything for you Meto'o, well… fine, I will help you but how?"

Don Meto'o gave him an evil smile and said:

"Yes, you are my best brother! Here is the plan... "

FooLio ©

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Posted by queen:

i will be back to write u a comment about ur "novel" but i'm a litle busy now..so i copy-pasted it on my computer and i'll be back soon to tell u what i think about it!
ttyl, queen sara(h) =D
Monday, March 26th 2007 @ 8:46 AM

Posted by FooLa Chocolitaz:

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!! thanks dear!! u are my Queen!! =$ please tell me what you think!! even if it was exteremly WA3!! please tell me!! tc!
Monday, March 26th 2007 @ 9:32 AM

Posted by queen:

Incredible!! I read through the lines, my eyes shifting from one word to the other…
But I want to be of use to you so I decided to criticize your writing if u don't mind my dear, I thought it kinda lacked details (u go from death to birth and then death again) so I feel that if you could just emphasize on those moments and hey, i want the story to be longer (when details are put in it will be) don't te7remeena 3an your incredible talent. Other than that you do need a person who's willing to edit your work.
All in all...it was incredible AND WHAT IS THE PLAN!!!!!!!!!!! *stumping on the floor cuz i'm so0o freakin' excited*
Ttyl, queen
p.s: are your characters English? cuz one of them used the word "bloody" in his talk. Hehe..fan questions!
Monday, March 26th 2007 @ 11:26 AM

Posted by Tina Mahan:

Wow! YOU WROTE THIS? I can't wait for the other chapters..........Keep it up!
Monday, March 26th 2007 @ 1:24 PM

Posted by FooLa Chocolitaz:

heey tine and my Queen! thanks for your comments!
and about your critisizings!! =P, i know it's like ( this one lived and this one died!! ) you will know why this one died and this one lived!! but later!;) and about the plan! you will know it so soon! it's just the begining my dears!! ;)
thank you so much for reading my 1st chapter of... Love & Spain
Tuesday, March 27th 2007 @ 7:19 AM

Posted by vitani:

Lovely!!!!

Really, you have alot of talent... keep posting please...

Anyways.. i've added you...
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